Friday, February 11, 2011

Payback

Kavanagh killed toms fake mother but it made him mad so he was trying to save her while kavanagh escape and went to some place in Russia. He was leaving the hotel after selling the product that made Noah wells unable to feel pain to some soldiers. He passes a maid that I just figured out was Madison because pandora found him and Tom are capuring him. I wonder if Tom will kill him or capture him I think he will kill him.
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3 comments:

  1. Stephanie GallegosFebruary 14, 2011 at 2:32 PM

    Dawson,
    Try and record more of your inner voice on the blog- just like you do here with your last sentence...
    Mrs G

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  2. lola benwayFebruary 15, 2011 at 9:47 AM

    Dawson,
    That sounds like a great book. the only comment i have is to make sure you don't retell the story, otherwise great job.

    Chapin

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  3. dawson KFebruary 15, 2011 at 10:36 AM

    I've been trying to work on that

    Dawson K

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